On Rhyme

On Rhyme

A Poem by Alfred Kukitz
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Is rhyme divinely ordained?

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I saw rhyme climbing the walls of Dover,

charming elegantly a baby's soul,

electrifying synapses of Beethoven's Fifth,

elevating the word to poetic elegance and 

summonings the bareness of life with the cloth of the divine. 

© 2014 Alfred Kukitz


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: ) ok I have to say, I love to rhyme, it's just so much fun.
I try not over do it though, some people are so anti-rhyme.
Great little poem Alfred. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Thanks Chris! I have one of your books. Something with clouds in the title. New dog so I haven't had much time to read. Take care!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Thank Jacobs! Most times the poem surprises me.

Posted 9 Years Ago


if it is, i am going to that other place below...i am not inclined to rhyme except in rare circumstances when it comes really natural...

i really like the analogies here...this is quite a wonderful short piece.

jacob

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on July 12, 2014
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Tags: rhyme, Dover, cloth, divine

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Alfred Kukitz
Alfred Kukitz

Deering, NH



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