When It Came to Loving You

When It Came to Loving You

A Poem by Alfred Kukitz
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a long fall into beauty

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When It Came to Loving You



If it came to words I wouldn’t know

how to tell you I love you

nor know the deeper meaning of our togetherness


I can take you in my arms

coo a sweet hum in your ear,

kiss your neck,

fondle an earlobe,

listen as you beam in majestic simplicity 

follow you all the way to your soul

and hide my love inside your heart.


The words have long since passed

I have eternity in my eyes

a silence that keeps joy’s forever glow!

© 2015 Alfred Kukitz


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Thank you Randall! Thanks for visiting!

Regards,
Al

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sounds like a beautiful life time love. Mature and just keeps getting deeper.

Posted 9 Years Ago


It seems I have seen you before. Do you come here often?

My name is Al and he thanks you!

Posted 9 Years Ago


"The words have long since passed"...but the heart carries their weight, no matter the passing of time or distance between.

I loved the "coo"!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I am graced by wonderful people who visit my longings and tribulations. Thank you!

Regards,
Al

Posted 9 Years Ago


The words have long since passed
I have eternity in my eyes
a silence that keeps joy’s forever glow!

Some graceful and love-filled penning.

Posted 9 Years Ago


ah words are words, experience shows us how to translate those feelings into actions...and they speak louder.

Posted 9 Years Ago


follow you all the way to your soul
and hide my love inside your heart

majectically beautiful words Al

I fell hard for a beauty my first year in university but I was already seeing someone and so never said anything to the muse whose eyes, face, shoulders and absolute grace drew many a poem from my heart. The relationship I was in never worked out and I have always wondered what would have happened if I had been honest with myself and others at the time.

FT

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on March 12, 2015
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Alfred Kukitz
Alfred Kukitz

Deering, NH



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