Chasing Tail

Chasing Tail

A Poem by Alfred Kukitz
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what a butt?

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Chasing Tail

Man laying in the gutter of dreams,
Hands extending outward as far as
man's reach.
Between breathes, a lover's tale,
Cable channel airing commercial screams
while the tale chases its tail on TV screens.

© 2015 Alfred Kukitz


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I thought face book took care of that! Thanks for your visit love!

Al

Posted 4 Years Ago


...and here I thought I was going to read something about Jackson & Honey getting into mischief!

; (

Posted 4 Years Ago


FT always a nice surprise! Thanks for stopping!

Regards,
Al

Posted 4 Years Ago


We've all chased 'tail' at one time or another and i didn't have cable so I never had to put up with all those crappy programs. A clever write that reminds me of tongue wagging days in dreamy gutters :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Thanks D! You may do anything you want with this poem. I love you, Ya know!

Regards,
Al

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tale chases its tail--Al, that was brilliant!! Could I bottle up that poem and keep it with me always?? In the gutter, looking at the stars is like using margarine on the toast and talking of butter.. okay, that sounded better in my head than on paper(screen in this case?)..perhaps that gutter led to butter. It's funny how my mind works, Al...
Love the poem!!!! :D

Posted 4 Years Ago


Hi Pryde!

Glad you could stop by with that beautiful pearly face!

Regards,
Al

Posted 4 Years Ago


As the country song goes … looking for love in all the wrong places. Love this, Al.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Ya I liked it. The TV, executives should be chained to a chair and made to watch the crap they put on the air.

Thanks Guys!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Clever weaving of words Al.
Perhaps a take on our over-sexualized TV programming?

Posted 4 Years Ago



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