I Love You Al

I Love You Al

A Poem by Alfred Kukitz
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guardian angel

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I Love You Al

Aside from the first angel's note
you threw my way
I asked for more but you stayed away
A peak of your wings was ocean's far
An isle of dreaming made you come upon my star
The Vietnam veteran coming home
where I land only you will know
Your note read, I love you Al, a wish made clear on the angel's star

© 2017 Alfred Kukitz


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Thank you Emma!

I had such a good time in Maine repeating, In the Sweetness, to all the ladies. They loved it! I never hold back Emma from the beauty of words.

Regards,
Al

Posted 6 Years Ago


A very precious guardian angel.. one to cherish, one who means more than heaven can tell an earthling, Al.

' I love you Al, a wish made clear on the angel's star.. ' Such treasure.. almost too personal to tell but then.. proud, delighted you. Your words are so sincere, so meaningful. We should all have an angel like that when times are dark..

Posted 6 Years Ago


Thanks Doodley!

For all your kindness!

Regards,
Al

Posted 6 Years Ago


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You are a very lucky man for two reasons, Alfred....

You managed to come home, and to come home into the loving embrace of one who would chase your nightmares away.

Respect to you, Alfred. A finely poignant write.

Posted 6 Years Ago


You are always welcomed Sami,

The touch of your phrase, a hint of praise, the man I know who comes home to me.

Regards,
Al

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wow. So sad and so touching. Almost made me tear up. Thank you for sharing Alfred...:)................

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on September 2, 2017
Last Updated on September 2, 2017
Tags: Angel, note, star, love

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Alfred Kukitz
Alfred Kukitz

Deering, NH



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