rise low

rise low

A Poem by Alfred Kukitz
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rise low

we want to start you out low
sinner for beginners
venial, later the big time, mortal sins
WHOA!
we want you to praise God which will keep you low
don’t stand up, keep kneeling,
get the idea.......low......low
god is on high..........whoa!
now listen to me sinners
confess, eat some christ, say your prayers
and go to bed.
remember when you rise.......rise low!

© 2018 Alfred Kukitz


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thanks coyote!

i couldn’t stop laughing. 8 years of catholic school and i don’t remember one moment when the nuns or priest showed any humor.

regards,
al

Posted 3 Years Ago


Amazing advice shared in your words Alfred.
"confess, eat some christ, say your prayers
and go to bed.
remember when you rise.......rise low"
I liked the above lines. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry. I enjoyed this one.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago



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Added on May 2, 2018
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Tags: low, sinner, god, kneeling, christ

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Alfred Kukitz
Alfred Kukitz

Deering, NH



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