it's a poem from my second book The Opposte of Magic

a poem from the most glorious feast on ancient earth :)

Let's watch the moon,

let's meet the sun.

Let's hear soon

the way the Deed was done!

Let's listen to the sounds

the shiny crystals played.

Let's welcome crowds

of creatures good and great!

Author's Note

what do you think about grammar, and the rhymes?

Reviews

[Ms. Gruye]

hmmm..not bad for a piece within a piece. It feels like the first stanza of any greek story which beckons the muse and sets the tone, though I wish there were more after to substantiate the invoking.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Great, succinct write. It flows wonderfully and again is really uplifting in spirit. Your kind soul shines through your writing. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha