The Raging Storm

scary, weather, storm, rain, waves

The Raging Storm

During the rough rainy night’s of the suburban city,

The thunder roared.

And like an electric charge,

 The lightning gave life to the storm.

As the great tides came crashing and colliding on shore,

The gloomy clouds started to get darker,

The storm raged intensely,

And the eerie noises became louder and scarier.

 

Reviews

[C. Rose]

Favorite line "The lightening gave life to the storm"
Although I also like "crashing and colliding"

[Bluefire]

But then the sun comes out afterward, right? It can't rain forever.
This is almost like a scary story, only it really shouldn't be because it's just rain, thunder and lightning.
Anywho, well done. ^^

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Very creative poem, I really like it. :-)

Kaze~ :-)