Sailing

dum diddy dum dum

I went sailing on the seas,

I sailed underwater,

and through the trees.

I went sailing on the seas,

and found what i was looking for,

I found myself,

Drifting through the breeze.

I was free, I was free

Author's Note

let me know what you think :)

Reviews

[John Fitzgerald]

wonderful :) your words move as light as the breeze you're drifting through!

[The Analog Kid]

Peaceful sailing with nice scenery.

[michael.c.m]

Happy, very; thankyou for this.

[MOON]

Light and breezy , lovely flow.

[Reform69]

I liked the feeling of joy and freedom I get while reading this poem. I enjoyed it =)

[forevermore1218]

this was so pretty dude :)
I love how much effort you gave into these lines, it sounds like a siren song.

love this so much

[The Winter Grey]

Very pretty, and it invoked some striking images. I really enjoyed it.

[Jerome]

Lovely!

It is short and simple, but it is so perfect in delivery. I like the surreal mention of sailing underwater, and through trees. Hints at a journey long and beyond belief. I have read this one many times, and it is a sweet read.

[Ecko]

Kind of reminds me of the opening scene in Avatar...gives me a nice visual :)

[Sujash I. Purna]

nice work here...the title first reminded me of WB Yeats's Sailing to Byzantium but when I read it to be sure, it felt so concise and simple yet aesthetically commendable.