Activity

In spinning Earth, and blazing stars, in shifting plates, and Moons of Mars, Activity sings loud its song: "Living idle's, living wrong." And in the nighttime stars' brigade (Man beholden, Heaven-made) a silken lady whispers low "Always quicken; never slow."

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

An excellent, flowing poem with a beautiful smooth melody.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. The good description allowed the reader to create visions and thoughts from the good description. I like the key statements in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ruairidh]

Thanks, it's good to know that your poetry is visualised by the reader. I'm glad you liked it and I appreciate your comment.

[bobc]

R...quite enjoyed this. Tight metre and rhyme...well done...bobc

[Ruairidh]

Thanks for your comment, glad you enjoyed it :)

[Miss Kerri]

I really like this, especially the line "and Moons of Mars".
Great!

[Ruairidh]

Thank you. It's always good to get feedback. I had something entirely different to Moons of Mars at first - ach, no shame in admitting: it was 'bustling bars', which didn't work at all. I'd have been in a tough spit cosmically if it wasnt for mars; mercury would never have worked!