i miss you dad

i miss you

i miss the time we spent together

i miss seeing you

i miss hearing your voice

i miss the way i could go to you for anything

dad i miss you

i miss you

 

i miss you

i miss your smile

i miss the old times

i mis our father douter time together

i miss spending the holidays with you

i miss spending the weekends with you

i miss spendingthe summer with you

i mis you dad

Reviews

[Daydreamer54]

Well I proud u! U didn't have a lot of mispellings in this peice! douter-daughter
In the last mine, you forgot the second "s' in miss. Also ur "i"s need to be capatilized. Other then that, nice write!

[Coyote Poetry]

A very sad poem. We need those people who made us laugh and kept us in line. A father love is necessary for a young woman. More patience for their daughters. A very strong poem for your father. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Ashley Black]

very very good job
"i miss the old times

i mis our father douter time together"
you left an "s" off miss and i think you meant "daughter"
but no big deal just little things.
good job though

[Angelauthor1204]

I like the poem. I can see the writer's feelings for her father. =v=

[BELLA]

MY PARENTES ANT TOGETHER
so i dont see my dad at all anymoore

[nono]

I love this poem so much you wouldn't believe cause my parents are not together anymore so i hardly ever get to see him.