Children

Children

A Chapter by Lauren Beth
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Senryu Slayers WOTD- canorous

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little ones running

canorous laughter wafting
in the autumn breeze


© 2010 Lauren Beth


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makes me want to produce children for the beautiful innocence of it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Beautiful!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very lovely. I wish I could think up short sharp poems like these, but they always end up a bit rubbish :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Child know real pleasure. A open field and being able to run. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


nice

Posted 10 Years Ago


This senryu stays close to the original haiku captured moment emphasis.

Refreshing. It's as if the children's laughter links the nature haiku w/the senryu wit.

Lively like a breeze, flows like a stream.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Really lovely work :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


this is good!! this is just beautiful! i love those last 2 lines!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Brief and beautiful .. gentle, pure .. if only everyone and everything was like this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


sweet innocence

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Lauren Beth
Lauren Beth

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I enjoy writing poetry, usually just what comes to me. I write for me, it's like just something that I need to get out. Whatever hits me at the moment I start jotting down, on sticky notes, napkins.... more..

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