Children

Senryu Slayers WOTD- canorous

little ones running
canorous laughter wafting
in the autumn breeze

Reviews

[Ed Rector]

makes me want to produce children for the beautiful innocence of it.

[Pollyanna]

Beautiful!

[Jaffa Forbes]

Very lovely. I wish I could think up short sharp poems like these, but they always end up a bit rubbish :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Child know real pleasure. A open field and being able to run. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Robin]

nice

[Pax Analog]

This senryu stays close to the original haiku captured moment emphasis.

Refreshing. It's as if the children's laughter links the nature haiku w/the senryu wit.

Lively like a breeze, flows like a stream.

[Lilly]

Really lovely work :)

[Light]

this is good!! this is just beautiful! i love those last 2 lines!!

[emmajoy]

Brief and beautiful .. gentle, pure .. if only everyone and everything was like this.

[Wondering Mind]

sweet innocence