FIND THE TRIGGER FIND THE MARK

FIND THE TRIGGER FIND THE MARK

I don't want to be forgotten

so I'm leaving my mark.

I want to be remembered;

an impression that will last.

A painter with his picture,

a writer with his pen,

I want to be remembered,

it's just a question of when.

For memories are forgotten

and being mortal too,

my impression having been written

will be there, forever to view.

Reviews

[sereenaoutloud]

Love this one and i think every reader will feel the same, writer or not. We all want to be remembered and leave our mark on this world. some want it through fame and fortune, some through words and work and some though love and friendship! My personal opinion to be remembered is in the small things that we do everyday for those around us!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you sereena

[A.marie.speaks]

Writing is so individual and uniquely self explanatory that it gives every reader a glimpse into your soul. There is no better way to be remembered, in my opinion.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you A .marie

[Ruth]

Beautiful...our legacy is what we make it...I often think on this and believe we really never know how much someone will remember us, more often than not, people are remembered more than they thought they would be...lovely piece Andrew...

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Poppy

[Death's Poet]

Beautiful. I really enjoyed this. We all want to be remembered. very relatable Poem. amazing as always

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

This piece really hit a mark with me as well. I feel all true writers feel this way. We want to be immortal. Want our words to land us somewhere in history.
Great job elaborating on that!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Ashley for reviewing:)

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

You are welcome, dear. :)

[alf]

Hi Andrew. I smiled as I read this because you have written what lies at the bottom of every poet's inspiration. I so loved this!! Love the analogies, painters etc, love the deep yearning voice that seeps from the words. I believe you may achieve you desire. Just keep slogging and improving, (Hopefully we'll both get there one day, so save a place for me!!!!), alf

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks alf for a great review.:)