Gourmet Pizza Express

Excuse me Sir!

yes!

Would you like to try our new Pizza line?

What have you got?

We have "EARTH"  A larger than Life with the lot with a thin crust.

Yummy!

We have "LIFE".    A large Life with the lot with a thick crust.

Oooh! Yummy too! And this one!

That one's called "TOMORROW". Sir. Its another chance with a thin crust.

I'll try that one! thank you.

Life always offers you a second chance

It's called "TOMORROW"

Enjoy tomorrow! 

Reviews

[alifeacoustic]

Yoda is wise he is. (Just be glad you didn't have to put up with me saying that in a yoda voice, only I had that displeasure and can't stop now, I will have to have a word with myself to behave.
Great outlook to have Andrew no matter how bad things went today, there is always tomorrow. Who knows what it holds in store for us. I'm sure yoda does, but he ain't talking now)

[andrew mitchell]

While we ponder there is star wars lol! going on! We all need a little Yoda! where can I get some!? Thanks Lorry

[θεά]

I love the message in this apparently simple, though not simplistic piece of writing.
It manages to combine the environmental concern with fatalism and the ephemerality of the moral self.

Thanks for sharing.
Hard-hitting and prudent read.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much for your review Malika

[~]

A great moral to this poem. I liked how you played on the meaning of the words, and especially the oxymoron of the title, because nothing express can be gourmet. :D

[andrew mitchell]

How true skittles but life is gourmet and time is express lol:):)

[Fran Marie]

The many layers of life can pile up ..like the analogy here.. and optimistic POV for a second chance.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you for dropping by Fran

[nazia]

This is clever. The way you describe the words here give them a new meaning. You are indeed crafty :)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you nazia lol crafty!!!

[sereenaoutloud]

You are so very creative and clever, I'm not a pizza fan but totally love this write! Each slice a new beginning and a fresh start!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you sereena:):)... OUTLOUD!!

[sereenaoutloud]

Your welcome...whisperingam hehehe

[Valentine]

A very clever idea for a write. loved it. Valentine

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Valentine

[Jen]

This is simply awesome! Wisdom sculpted into words, beautifully done. I love the message too. O' and I love pizza so this made it an even better slice of life! Bravo!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Jen

[B]

I love this one

Very smart
And the pizza take on things

I loooooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeeeee pizza

Great job

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you friend:):)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Pizza Express are my favourite brand of pizzas!

Another jolly canter through the weird and playful jungle of your creative mind Andrew!

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks John I appreciate your constructive wit lol:)