Visiting hours.

Visiting hours.

A Poem by andrew mitchell

If there was a heaven
and a place called hell
there would be visiting hours.

© 2019 andrew mitchell


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no reservation required. i prefer the one with the pool and bellhop. imagine how things would change after such a visit. great food for thought andrew ... :)

Posted 3 Days Ago


Ah Andrew, I wonder if getting an appointment would be easier than getting to see the family doctor?

Posted 6 Days Ago


andrew mitchell

6 Days Ago

Lol thanks John, can you imagine the line up for tickets like going to a concert!
and then we would have better idea where we wanted to end up, or not.

Posted 6 Days Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Days Ago

hearing you recite, Pat, would make either place worth it.
Patricia Wedel

6 Days Ago

Oh my word... I feel like a Lady at last. Amen
andrew mitchell

6 Days Ago

We need angels up there Pat so I’m sure you will qualify

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Added on July 11, 2019
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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia



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