On stage, a chamber’s concert.

What is the mind
but a stage
for the audience
of thoughts
to entertain him.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is thought-provoking, the goal for brief expressions. Even tho your poem says nothing about continuity, I found myself pondering different ways the mind jumps from one stage performance to the next. Some are more concerned with each dazzling performance, whereas others are more into continuity! *wink! wink!* Fondly, Margie

[emmajoy]

Oh my, oh my! These words crackle this mind.. so cleverly put, erudite to the core! Andrew, have read you for ages, but, forgive if i say this is the best of the best.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you emma you are too kind. I do think you are the talented one on reading many of yours however I don't comment in case i sound like a worn out record being a man of few words.

[emmajoy]

You're very kind but.. in all honesty i just blather according to mood and whatever comes to mind, andrew. Gave up pretending i was a poet ages ago.. but love the feel of language floating the air when I'm in the cafe. Hope you have a truly happy weekend :)

[andrew mitchell]

You too but you underestimate yourself, poets are in awe of your writings!

[emmajoy]

Thank you but.. i could list so many who know their craft and convert it to true art, time and time again. Hope you've enjoyed your Saturday!