In the grammar of a punctuated life.

What verse are we given
in the sentence of our lives
to run with a verb
always carrying the noun
of us somewhat objective, always adjective
in a comma passing
we all reach the fullstop.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i seem to always pause in semi-colon fashion, unable to find that full stop...and a bit too slow these days for a comma...
when i was younger, i was more of a cause and effect character...the old comma/conjunction combo.
love poems that deal with semantics/ grammar as metaphor.
j.

[andrew mitchell]

I reckon you would have had a lot of tricks up your sleeve not forgetting how clever you are in English. I'm reading a book by Stephen Fry called the ode less travelled and the language for poetry seems so complex lol and I find I'm not a poet at all in the true sense after all but a thought dis player.