The emphysema of a dream.

The surreal coughs up

reality from the depths

a mid summers dream.

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

When smokers die, their last wish is a cigarette
with their last breath. It was their choice.
I will breathe my last breath with a sigh and a
rhyme for a good time on earth. A very clever
Senryu. It must be a pass-time of serenity. truly, Pat

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you always for your kind words and lovely review Pat.:)