Within the motionless of being.

Within the motionless of being.

A Poem by andrew mitchell

So soothing your voice
drowning in the waves of silence.
The stillness now beating echoes
harmonious to the tune
of being alive but
still quiet in the moment.
In a corner
a shadow of solitude
sits amongst clouds
motionless within its wilderness.

© 2020 andrew mitchell


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this reads to me like a very meditative state of mind, if in regards to self:) if it is in regards to someone outside of self, it feels like a spectral quality:) either way it feels like a nice place to be

Posted 1 Month Ago


'.. a shadow of solitude - sits amongst clouds - motionless within its wilderness. '

That, andrew mitchell, is the truest of unpretentious calm. A place where real people want to be, want to find hands to hold and words with the clearest of meanings. Great but gentle phrasing here. A dream-maker.

Posted 1 Month Ago


emmajoy

1 Month Ago

You're welcome. Hope you're nowhere near the fires or other trouble.. keep safe, andrew.
andrew mitchell

1 Month Ago

I’m fine thank you Emma, just at the point of no return in writing. Being in a blank state for som.. read more
emmajoy

1 Month Ago

Pleased to read that.. things reported here can be somewhat worrying .. same everywhere i guess. W.. read more

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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

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