A spanking good write!

The air was not pure

but it was invigorating.

I couldn't see much

on the night side

of bedroom manners

maybe cos it was dark.

Anyway, I was told

what you see depends

on where you stand.

So who knows

what wretchedness goes

under the sheets.

However, I did find out...

when I found

two smooth legs and

a pair of firm bosoms

that weren't mine.

Maybe, I'd be seized

by her most secret places.

After mature consideration

and literary courage

I cannot continue this

narration any further.

It was going to be

a spanking good write!

Goodnight!

Reviews

[barleygirl]

You have been on more of a sensual roll than I ever remember you to be! And I love it! You make erotica sound like nobody else does. Your escapades tickle the imagination & the body. Your light nuanced touch of "naughty" comes across perfectly balanced (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

clever play on words....smacks with delicious humor.
j.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you kindly Jacob.