The sunrise of some.

Sometime ago, somewhat,
something made
someone aware
that somebody
was trying to
find someplace.
It was somedeal
that somehow
someday somewhere
would be found
someway.

Reviews

[Robert Trakofler]

there was a song where in the refrain was... someday some way, that this poem somehow seemed to send me too:/ but what I see in this is the essence of a poem in short form and quite clever

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Robert Sir for your kind words.:)

[John the Baptist]

Were they found? Or was it some other?

[andrew mitchell]

Haha thanks John for entertaining my muse.

[Neville]

....... Hey, how cool is this .. so full of truths and got my foot tappin too by jove sir :)

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Neville as always too kind.

[Neville]

.......... Nah' but you are always welcome andrew :)

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

Cleverly whimsical and an enjoyment to read. Thank you for sharing your work.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Carlos.

[Einstein Noodle]

i agree with Ken ..clever and has a beat you can dance to ... makes me quite happy reading as I see a whole lot of hope on the rise .. tho we have many questions .. there is hope .. and Faith .. somehow, i love this little poem.:)
E.

[andrew mitchell]

thank you kindly Gene

[Ken Simm.]

Very clever and rythmic Andrew. I like it.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Ken for your kind words.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Ireally like this. Life is always in motion outside our box of family and friends

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Cowboy.

[Chris Shaw]

Sometimes, on some days we need to travel somewhere in our minds to remember a special sunrise. Sunrises are the start of a new day and they offer hope in difficult times. Hope all is well Andrew.

Chris

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Chris and yes you got to welcome sunrise.

[Pete]

this is "some" poem andrew. the sun always ushers a new day, someday is today - is up to us. how many times do we say, "some day"? there is so much in these words andrew. i will have to digest them for a while. there is beautiful meaning, rhythm and flow in here. one of my favorites of your's i think ... :)

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks a lot Pete for your kind words, yes it’s always been put off to someday or oneday!

[NotUsinganymore]

I liked thei poem, it had a good message!