A universe most wanted

If I could capture
the universe
I would put it
in a jar
for safe
keeping
but for the moment
a camera will
have to do.

Reviews

[light and ashes]

That is really beautiful. I love how this is worded.

[red93]

Interesting approach and good controlled brevity. I bet there are some great Night Skies in Adelaide.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you red93 for your words. Unlike you we are having clear skies and nights but the temp is soaring to 41C on Tuesday. Merry Xmas red93 may it be a safe and happy one.

[red93]

Happy Xmas to you as well Andrew.

[John the Baptist]

I would hate to try to open the lid on that one.

[andrew mitchell]

Haha just having fun. Merry Xmas John

[Coyote Poetry]

A picture of the universe and keeling her safe. Would be nice Andrew. Maybe the world will know safe place, someday. Merry Christmas my friend and thank you for sharing the interesting poetry.
Coyote

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you John and a safe and happy Xmas to you and your family. Best wishes Andrew

[Coyote Poetry]

You too Andrew and you are welcome.