My Forever..

I wrote this in like five minutes, it was very rushed, I'll fix it later.

How he always tells me he loves me,
The way that he promises forever,
How he always treats me like a queen,
He tells me he’ll leave me never.

Without him I would be nothing,
I need him like air to breathe,
Without him I wouldn’t be happy,
But he promised to never leave.

Always he makes me the luckiest girl,
I never knew a love so true,
He’s always made me feel completely safe,
Even when our love was young and new.

No one in this world makes me happier,
His voice makes my heart skip a beat,
No one can please me like he does,
He absolutely makes my life complete.

With him I feel on top of the world,
It’d take a whole lot to bring me down,
With him I can always be myself,
And I know my true love has been found.

Reviews

[unknown]

This is so beautiful, and honest! It's always amazing to see something like this, and just feel the love pouring out of every line, and just imagine the love that is felt through it.

I love this! You wrote it beautifully, Amanda!

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

aww, ohmygosh, thanks so much(:

[unknown]

You are very welcome! It made me feel like I was having my first crush all over again; :)

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Awww, hahaha(: I'm glad you enjoyed it, &thanks so much for reviewing!

[unknown]

It's no problem! :)

[An owl on the moon]

Oh, your words are overflowing with the sense of true love... the love that allows you to be yourself, and at the same time completes you somehow... Just an amazing, lifting write that makes me wish the same for everyone! Thank you for sharing this love so tender and beautiful... :)

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Awwww, it's no problem, thanks so much(:

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was amazing. I loved emotions within the the poem. It was great. Thanks for sharing. :3

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

No problem, thanks for taking the time to read &review(:

[Steven Cash]

Wonderful and glad you found love

Rhyming threw the flow a bit though. Watch for that

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Thanks, I'm gonna fix it, sorryy.