Fake "Friends"

Fake "Friends"

A Poem by Amandaaa Caroline (:

Losing friends,
Like seconds passing,
What did I do wrong?
I keep on asking.

Maybe it was them,
But maybe it was me,
Who cares anymore,
I'm finally free.

Wouldn't leave like that,
If they were truly real,
At least I know now,
It was a really dumb deal.

Trusted them with my secrets,
Called them a true friend,
But after time passed,
They weren't true in the end.

I'm really tired of this,
I'm not going to cry,
I'm just going to deal with it,
And tell them goodbye.

A waste of my time,
I should've seen it before,
Instead of believing it,
And trusting them even more...

© 2012 Amandaaa Caroline (:


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You didn't do anything wrong. A true friend wouldn't leave you, use you, or betray you. A fake friend isn't worth your time. I like the change of direction here. It started out a bit worried and upset, but then as it described the kind of friendship it changed and became almost annoyed with everything those "friends" put you through. Nice work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

8 Years Ago

Yes, I've discovered that, who the people are that really care about me, and who the ones are that a.. read more
CindyLu

8 Years Ago

well I like the change of direction. I think it adds to the piece. And it's good that you found out .. read more



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Really relatable

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

8 Years Ago

Thank you.
I adore this. I've had so many "friends" leave me, so this fits me perfectly. Wonderful poem:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
This is a great poem and very relatable. Keep it up! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

8 Years Ago

Thank you! (:
You didn't do anything wrong. A true friend wouldn't leave you, use you, or betray you. A fake friend isn't worth your time. I like the change of direction here. It started out a bit worried and upset, but then as it described the kind of friendship it changed and became almost annoyed with everything those "friends" put you through. Nice work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

8 Years Ago

Yes, I've discovered that, who the people are that really care about me, and who the ones are that a.. read more
CindyLu

8 Years Ago

well I like the change of direction. I think it adds to the piece. And it's good that you found out .. read more
the friends worth keeping are the ones who will stick with you no matter what, and will respect you for who you are.

the others?

it is their loss.

this is quite mature in its delivery and theme...

like it.

you have a talent, keep writing.

jacob

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

8 Years Ago

I completely agree with what you said about friendships.. Friends are people that we're supposed to .. read more
fake friends are definitly the worst i just had seven of them up and leave me

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

8 Years Ago

Oh dang, I'm so sorry :/ I know that that is one of the worst feelings.. It hurts a lot :(
That was really good. I love how you keep rhythm going


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

8 Years Ago

Thank you (:
Me, MACHO!! Me won't say that "I" cry. .... : ) A darling poem and a darling example of really having quite the grounded self-confidence to challenge the absurd "normalcy" that other people go through with their cliques, new friends, status amongst their peers, etc..... I actually felt the same way your poem hints at in places, where losing my friends to life itself, leaving me to basically find myself again in the faces of strangers but with THEIR confidence they gave me when they were around. When I was always told to grow up, even before knowing what that meant, I always felt a step behind going through the kinds of "growing pains" that are mentioned openly in this poem. You have a clever way of pulling me into you, and the cutest little whispers in your advice you give us while sharing with us, poems straight from the heart and gut, are an awesome "tell" to your beautiful character!! I won't assume to figure out how, but I know in some way, YOU are going to change some lives for the better just by being YOU and the way you write and protect your own heart. Great job!! Beautiful, Amanda. xoxo -Mark

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much, your review just made my whole day, so thanks for that too (: I'm really glad tha.. read more
Patrick Henry

9 Years Ago

What I WOULD love for you to do is.............. stay with me on my friend list, and no matter how m.. read more
Fake friends are just the worst. Once they start treating you like s**t that's when you know that they aren't true. A true friend would be there for you through anything. At least you would be able to trust them. If they were using you then say goodbye and walk away and then they realize that they lost someone truly amazing. I liked the flow of the poem. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

9 Years Ago

That is soooo true, I'm just done with it. Thanks so much (:
Friends and soon to not be friends never cease to amaze. The truth and respect should always begin from within yourself. That seems to scare away the bad people and welcome the new beginnings of a better life.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

9 Years Ago

Thanks for the advice (:

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