Love Is a Roller Coaster

Not sure how I feel about this one.

Looking back on things,
Before I knew you...
Life was meaningless,
Didn't know what to do.

What I wanted,
Well I thought I knew,
But things really changed,
When I luckily met you.

I was suddenly happy,
Smiling all the time,
Things had really changed,
And I really didn't mind...

But then we faced a problem,
You had to decide between two,
I'm glad you chose me,
And proved your love was true.

All of these months later,
We're still happy together,
I'm still glad you chose me,
And I'll still love you forever.

Love is a roller coaster,
There are always ups and downs,
How we survive them, though,
Shows if love has truly been found...

Reviews

[KeeD]

bittersweet obstacles of love, somehow I always get excited that i'm on the front row of the coaster.. and then when life hits me in the face like a coaster on the drop.. I wish I wasn't so scared to be sitting in the front, wish I could be one of the back bencher's and not face love/life head on cause like most good things in life, the joy ride is over before you know it. Great Write though, Love your imagery and expressiveness. It feels good to imagine what love is like, through your poems. Keep writing you're so talented.

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Awwww, thank you so much Keegan (:

[Amber]

Wow I really enjoyed this read. Keep up the great work!

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Thank you so much! (:

[Amber]

No problem. :)

[Shawna]

Very sweet and great flow. Great job!

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Thank you!

[Euro]

Really nice poem of love :)
I am glad that such happiness between two people can be transmitted so flawlessly into words
-Penelope H.

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Awwwww, thank you so much, I'm really glad you enjoyed it! (:

[Euro]

A good poem about love to me is golden. If you have read some of my poetry, half the time my love life is terrible while the other half is just a blessing. How ironic to know that my love poems, both of pain and happiness, come from the same person. I guess love really is a crazy thing.

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Hahahahaha it really is :P that's why I called it a roller coaster. Like I guess you could even say that your love is a roller coaster; sometimes making you feel on top of the world and extremely happy, then others you feel sad or in pain.. It's crazy. But I hope that the good times in your love life make up for the bad ones!

[Euro]

I wish so as well though for now, you can say I am in the bottom of the roller coaster and the ride isn't fun :/