I Can Finally Be Me

I Can Finally Be Me

A Poem by Amandaaa Caroline (:
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Just some thoughts expressed in poetry.. This was kinda my thinking process, I was thinking about how I'm not good enough, but then I realized I'm getting better. Well, I hope you enjoy (:

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I'm sorry I can't be perfect,
Extremely skinny and pretty,
That's what people want,
But it's quite hard to achieve.

I've always struggled with,
Loving myself, how I look,
So many insults and rumors,
My confidence, they took.

I was left kind of broken,
My reflection hated me,
But now the love of my life,
Is beginning to set me free.

I've gotten a little more confident.
In myself, I've begun to believe,
I've stood tall against the insults,
And now I can finally be me.

© 2013 Amandaaa Caroline (:


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Being you is being free, from any negativity.. It will always come your way, try to keep you dull and grey.. but Amanda you know you're brighter than a rainbow.. so shine your true colors girl, be vibrant, cause Amanda you add color to this darkened world.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Keegan! I know I've been off for awhile, but this was a great review to come back.. read more



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This write came from your heart and it said too much in your words, you've just converted your words into your this piece,.. what a great write..I always loved your writes ... this write's too great but it's a bit emotional.. but awesome. Wht ya wanted to say to him you said in your words. Keep posting.. all lines're deeply penned. 100/100.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much! (:
Rahul

7 Years Ago

Once again it's my pleasure and a pat on your back :)
Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Hahaha, thanks!
Being you is being free, from any negativity.. It will always come your way, try to keep you dull and grey.. but Amanda you know you're brighter than a rainbow.. so shine your true colors girl, be vibrant, cause Amanda you add color to this darkened world.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Keegan! I know I've been off for awhile, but this was a great review to come back.. read more
" Don't let others change you. "

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

I try not to (:
bryandc15

7 Years Ago

yeah 'cause you should ....thanks for sharing this piece......
Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

No problem (: poetry helps me express my emotions and calm myself down, so I don't mind sharing it a.. read more
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Oh wow this is absolutely beautiful!! I love how you say the love of your life is finally setting you free.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Crystal! (:
Yay! When all else fails, you are always you. Love the poem!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you!
I like the positive ending. People can be mean and with age. We learn to keep our distance from them. No perfect person. We are given gifts and a wise person runs with them and enjoy life with real friends. I like the flow of thoughts and the excellent ending. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you (:
very touching! I truly hope you regain full potential and break through everything :)
very simple yet elegant and stylish

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you!
This has much more hope to it! I love it! Someone once told me to fall in love with yourself, because if you love you, then someone simply wonderful will love you too. A very good piece! And as always your rhyme flows effortlessly. Keep up the good work!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Awwww, thank you so much Emily (:
Serenity Faith

7 Years Ago

Anytime Amanda! ^_^
the love of my life is begining to set me free"... smooth line and deep too.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you! Sadly, it's no longer true :/
kink

7 Years Ago

luv is a fair unfair game,
dared to play you have to see ,
we lose the person not the .. read more
Always stand tall and believe in yourself. Only you can set the standard for how others will love and treat you. True beauty shines out from within... Like your thoughts did on paper. It was beautifully written;))


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Hahaha, thank you (:

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