I Don't Know

I Don't Know

A Poem by Amandaaa Caroline (:
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Sorry guys, I'm a big mess at the moment.

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I don't know anything anymore,
I feel like I don't even know you,
We were so close, so in sync,
But, was any of it true?

Everyone has given up on me,
No one cares anymore,
You said you wouldn't give up,
You promised... You swore.

I don't know what happened,
I'm me, same as I've always been,
Everything else has changed, though,
More than I can comprehend.

I guess people just change,
I guess they just grow apart,
I guess they change their minds,
Or have a change of heart.

Feeling so useless and pointless,
I just... Don't really know.
Can we go back to how we were?
Or should I just go ahead and go?

© 2013 Amandaaa Caroline (:


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and how old are you, my sweet? i have two words to describe this malady you speak of......RAGING HORMONES.....love, true love, is very rare at your age. i know you feel it, but trust me, chemicals in your brain are racing to beat the clock. this a good write and i understand your pain and confusion. be kinder to yourself and take your time.

Posted 7 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

quinfinn

7 Years Ago

it's gonna be fine girl. you have many more years to experience love. all young boys understand is .. read more
Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Aww, haha, thank you (: I'll work on it.
quinfinn

7 Years Ago

awesome!



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I can feel the longing all along, longing for the resplendent days that has now turned insipid. I 'm me same as I have always been. what went wrong befuddles us. thanks for excellent poetry.

Posted 3 Years Ago


...This is really powerful. You can feel the emotion, the longing....and sadness. You are very talented for your age and it breaks my heart to know that someone so young feels like this. I hope that what ever is going on, will work itself out, one way or another.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

6 Years Ago

I'm very sorry for the delayed reply!

Thank you so much! Yes, those feelings are terri.. read more
Wonderful Letdown

6 Years Ago

It's okay, I haven't been on in a while either.....I'm so glad you're doing better!!! I hope that it.. read more
Amandaaa Caroline (:

6 Years Ago

I hope the same as well! Thanks again (:
this is great! really visual. you cant let others make you feel that way, always keep your head high! things will come to you. (: hope this helped.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

It really did, haha, thank you (:
Quiet Child

7 Years Ago

That's great! Your welcome dear (:
Beautiful piece:) I love your style of writing ... Keep it up amandaaa

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can really relate to this poem. It's always hard losing someone close to you. Wonderful job on this writing:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much (:
this is a great poem i really can relate to it

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you(: though I'm sorry you've had to experience these feelings :/
Stay back or move on?!
Yes you got it right with these few verses...and the eternal dilemma goes on...
Thx for a nice one!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Hahaha, thank you!
poetry-kiddo alienbaba

7 Years Ago

:)
Very nice and emotional work for your age. I always enjoy your poems, you most definitely have a talent. Very nice work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you Courtney (:
Courtney

7 Years Ago

My pleasure.
I understand how you feel, love how i can connect with your poem, being a teenager a feeling love is hard, hormones and thoughts always changing and starts to make you confused at times. but great poem i love it

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you (:
we all come to this bump in life where we realise things and question ourselves, those moments will come back more oftwn than you think. But you have to learn how to be stronger every single time, it's hard but through experuence you will start seeing clearer. Just enjoy the ride.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you (:

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Amandaaa Caroline (:

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