No More Heartbreak

No More Heartbreak

A Poem by Amandaaa Caroline (:
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Just.. Writing. About.. Stuff. So yeah, tell me what you think.

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I have poured my heart out,

My secrets have all been told,

I thought I was special,

You acted like I was gold.

 

That's the problem though,

It was all just an act,

My tears started streaming,

Couldn't help but react.

 

Many times over,

My heart has been broken,

My heart has been stolen,

And kept as a token.

 

I thought I was in love,

But I was completely wrong,

I feel stupid now,

Should've seen it all along.

 

It took true love, though,

To help me realize my mistake,

No longer will I fall for it,

Hopefully no more heartbreak.

© 2013 Amandaaa Caroline (:


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such a sweet and wonderfully constructed write, this is an improvement over previous writes...so much more real emotion and not as much unconnected feeling. i think you need to keep writing and hone your skills, because there is a flame of talent burning within you which should not be denied. well done, Amandaaa!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you!



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Love always hurt it's true bcoz, love;s a truth and truth always hurt!
Your this awesome Heartbreak write breaks my heart too, i felt bad about you if you really got heart break or break up with someone... well, you've too think tht you're the not one on this world who got hurt everyday .. in everyminu. too many folks get some hurt but depends on ;em hhow they stand up after fall in love on the ground and in the life....
awesome write, you've made from brroken heart..1010/100.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Rahul! (: I'm really glad that you liked it, and yes, this write is kind of just m.. read more
I know this feeling a little to well, it hurts knowing you fell for someone who does not feel the same or hurts you cause they want revenge.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

6 Years Ago

It REALLY does. However, I am better now. I'm sorry for the delayed reply.. I just now got back on t.. read more
Wow. Within all of the pain, there's a glimmer of hope. Something that you see, but many people don't. Very good.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much (:
emotional piece..... intriguing title:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Haha, thanks :P
bryandc15

7 Years Ago

No problem amandaaa
A sweet, poetic construction you have here. Your talent always escapes in the most brilliant ways with your poems. Thank you for sharing another heartfelt piece!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Awww, you're too sweet, haha (:
nice write and you have described your emotions beautifully in there!

hearts do break by many people but in the end it is because they broke that u know the one who can heal it!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Yes, that's true. Thank you!
Muhammad Qasim

7 Years Ago

U r welcome!
this is the part after the relationship where you begin to realize that you're not the problem... i love the strength this write shows. this had a very powerful feel to it:) thank you for sharing yours truely Danielle

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you Danielle (:
Aww, again very sweet and emotive. I can feel the sadness because it is so raw - i can imagine you feeling this way when your writing it, with tears and tissues everywhere, it's what happens to me when I write painful pieces. You're so talented!
Love to you x

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Icelanna, that's very sweet of you (: but haha, yes, I was crying when I wrote all of the.. read more
oh. sweet. no more heart break... i drink to that.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Hahaha (:
Amanda: if he hurts you, know he is not worth your time. Find that boy who treats you like a queen, who loves you regardless, who has seen you at your worst and didn't run away but instead helped you through the hard times. He's out there, just keep looking. Great piece :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Aww, haha, thank you. This particular one was actually about past relationships, but I've just been .. read more
C.C. Marx

7 Years Ago

My pleasure, remember never settle. Been there lets just say id rather stay single than go back

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