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I'll Lock My Heart Away

I'll Lock My Heart Away

A Poem by Amandaaa Caroline (:
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Alright, I'm trying to be happy since you were all complaining about how sad I was :P It's not as sad as my last few poems, still kind of emotional though. Tell me what you think, if you'd like (:

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No more wishes at 11:11,
Laughs and loving kisses before bed,
Never again will I be like that,
'Til I'm sure he means what he's said.

I won't open my heart up,
'Til I'm sure I can actually trust,
I won't get my heart broken again,
True love and smiles are a must.

I'm tired of all the crying,
All of these wasted tears,
Really wish I could stop,
But they just seem to appear.

I guess heartbreak causes tears,
No matter how strong you are,
You can't hold it all in forever,
Like locking emotions in a jar.

But I will lock my heart away,
My true love will have the key,
Then I can finally be happy again,
Once he sets my heart free.

© 2013 Amandaaa Caroline (:


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There is such a beauty in the heart of hope, even though it holds such scars of memory's echo. Yes, love involves a depth of trust, and I'm glad you're at a place where you can wait for the one who will adore you above all others. You're worth it, Amandaaa! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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There is such a beauty in the heart of hope, even though it holds such scars of memory's echo. Yes, love involves a depth of trust, and I'm glad you're at a place where you can wait for the one who will adore you above all others. You're worth it, Amandaaa! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

But I will lock my heart away,
My true love will have the key,
Then I can finally be happy again,
Once he sets my heart free.

That last one stanza's nicely penned indeed... words're powerful. Nice flow of ink here in this write once again. Lovely write, it's again came right from the bottom of your heart. 100/100.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much (:
Intence, Sad and dark a Sorrowful write

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thanks.. I think :P
A poem of superb quality.
Very well rhymed and very meaningful.
I will not judge you on the basis of your age.
I must say the poetic talent is your treasure.
Keep it with passion and patience.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you SO much! Your review means a lot to me, and I am so glad that you found it to be good. And.. read more
zainul

7 Years Ago

You are most welcome,dear poet.:)
All difficulties will be defeated by your determination to w.. read more
There are many lines in here I like because I've been there, though my reasons were different from yours. Honey, whatever you do, locking away your heart/emotions is one of the worst things you can ever do. Humans are meant to feel and express, by locking it away you are denying yourself. That and the time will come, when you realize that even YOU don't know how to unlock your heart anymore. No one can save you from yourself, the only one who can....is you. I'm not saying to keep your heart unprotected, just be wary of who you let in. Because it's impossible to shut out only a piece, in the end you will shut out the whole. If you can't be happy without a man, you won't gain what you're looking for if you're with one. You are a very talented young woman with wisdom beyond your years.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the advice! I believe that I've begun to learn some of what you just mentioned already. I.. read more
Awful indeed.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A new resolution in poetic fashion,
A heartbreak for a reason
repeats season after season


(^_*)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

**whistles** that was good :) Good flow and awesome words

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you!
You can't hold it all in forever,
Like locking emotions in a jar.
you said it so beautifully. Your own writing gives you strength.
I love the last stanza, it sounds so hopefully and wonderful. Good write Amanda

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thanks Keegan!
Keep up the good work amandaaa

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you (:

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