I'll Lock My Heart Away

I'll Lock My Heart Away

A Poem by Amandaaa Caroline (:
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Alright, I'm trying to be happy since you were all complaining about how sad I was :P It's not as sad as my last few poems, still kind of emotional though. Tell me what you think, if you'd like (:

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No more wishes at 11:11,
Laughs and loving kisses before bed,
Never again will I be like that,
'Til I'm sure he means what he's said.

I won't open my heart up,
'Til I'm sure I can actually trust,
I won't get my heart broken again,
True love and smiles are a must.

I'm tired of all the crying,
All of these wasted tears,
Really wish I could stop,
But they just seem to appear.

I guess heartbreak causes tears,
No matter how strong you are,
You can't hold it all in forever,
Like locking emotions in a jar.

But I will lock my heart away,
My true love will have the key,
Then I can finally be happy again,
Once he sets my heart free.

© 2013 Amandaaa Caroline (:


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There is such a beauty in the heart of hope, even though it holds such scars of memory's echo. Yes, love involves a depth of trust, and I'm glad you're at a place where you can wait for the one who will adore you above all others. You're worth it, Amandaaa! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


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love the emotion in this poem... it had a great flow and nice rythem to it...
thank you for sharing, yours truely:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thanks Danielle (:
First off, great job!! Second, I understand that your hurting and its hard to trust right now but make sure not to head straight to trust issues. Let's just yours truly has a hard time trusting anyone with my emotions, my heart, my secrets, you name it. Don't go to that point, you'll regret, it makes things significantly harder in the end

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

I won't be that bad, I'm just saying that the person who I spend my life with has to be the person I.. read more
C.C. Marx

7 Years Ago

Good idea, just make sure not to shut people out, even if they aren't the "one" I've been shutting p.. read more
Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Haha, thank you (:
great job:) the morals in this are profound keep you heart protected my friend for its only meant for two people-God and your future husband:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

marie

7 Years Ago

hey the thing about rain is that it has to end at some point and let the sun shine through the cloud.. read more
Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

And then comes a beautiful rainbow.. Haha(: and yeah, time is definitely an important factor.
marie

7 Years Ago

:) so allow it to carry you into the rainbow.... wow i sound like a skittles commercial :) lol
beautiful but very sad 100/100 great write

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you!
this is a good write.. happiness and sadness are a must part of life...they teach us so many things we could not even wonder! envy them when you have them :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thanks Muhammad!
Muhammad Qasim

7 Years Ago

it was my pleasure!
The ending is beau-ti-ful.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thanks Lewis!
Yes! Yes! You are making an attempt to move on past the pain! It is important to allow yourself to heal so that you may dance again! You deserve it!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you (:
Amanda, you're an amazing writer, and an amazing person (your writing gives that away) and you will be happy once more - be strong! Being strong is the philosophy, but not in a fake-smile-and-I'm-fine kind of way. You've got to be strong in a kind of way that shines through your poetry - true, feminine and independant. No one should have the key to your heart but you, or else it's time to change the lock.
Thank you for sharing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Haha, well by that I mean that my true love is going to be the person who allows me to love and trus.. read more
You know what Amanda? You're gonna be very happy after sometime. Love yourself. Until you love yourself, you won't find anyone who'll love you. You'll find your soul mate when you find solace within yourself. :)
You're a very realistic writer. Be happy. Optimism works. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Awww. Thank you (:
Thank you Amanda. You are an amzing writer and you seem like a sweet girl. Don't let any guy tell you differently or let him hurt. Stay strong hun. :) I like this poem a lot.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you (:
Be myself!

7 Years Ago

Your welcome!

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