I'll Lock My Heart Away

I'll Lock My Heart Away

A Poem by Amandaaa Caroline (:
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Alright, I'm trying to be happy since you were all complaining about how sad I was :P It's not as sad as my last few poems, still kind of emotional though. Tell me what you think, if you'd like (:

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No more wishes at 11:11,
Laughs and loving kisses before bed,
Never again will I be like that,
'Til I'm sure he means what he's said.

I won't open my heart up,
'Til I'm sure I can actually trust,
I won't get my heart broken again,
True love and smiles are a must.

I'm tired of all the crying,
All of these wasted tears,
Really wish I could stop,
But they just seem to appear.

I guess heartbreak causes tears,
No matter how strong you are,
You can't hold it all in forever,
Like locking emotions in a jar.

But I will lock my heart away,
My true love will have the key,
Then I can finally be happy again,
Once he sets my heart free.

© 2013 Amandaaa Caroline (:


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There is such a beauty in the heart of hope, even though it holds such scars of memory's echo. Yes, love involves a depth of trust, and I'm glad you're at a place where you can wait for the one who will adore you above all others. You're worth it, Amandaaa! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Amandaaa.....firstly i liked this line "LOCKING EMOTION'S IN JAR............."
& secondly i loved this line "SET'S MY HEART FREE.............''
Really i've liked + loved it...so...i wannna give u this time.....91/100.
carry-on.........great job......u r runinn fastly.........
."go on.......with ur's free heart;
if u'd do that then;no one will make ur's heart hurt,
cozzzzzz......in this world there's all around only dirt,
if u free with ur's heart,then u can get ur's right's on this earth.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I have to admit its at least hopeful at the end.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Haha, thanks Ahmad. I tried, but it was pretty much a fail :/
I love the poem. It was great

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thanks!
You're getting there :) Stil got lots of time to find someone to open up for!

Oh. I love the poem, btw. It really demonstrates whats going through a girl's head in tje process of healing herself. It was great

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Annabelle!

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Amandaaa Caroline (:
Amandaaa Caroline (:

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