My Love will be....

My Love will be....

A Poem by Amanda J. S.
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My love for you 
Will always be.
Maybe hidden
 Sometimes
But always there.

I'll compare my love for you 
With the sun at day
And with the moon at night.

No matter where you'll be
You will always be able to spot it.
Clouds can maybe cover it up
But it'll always be there
Right behind those clouds
No matter how wide they might be.

My love for you will be as eternal
As thoughts
As ideas
And will always be right there
But maybe concealed...

© 2012 Amanda J. S.


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wow happy him, lovely i like it

Posted 7 Years Ago


great! this is great.. like this poem :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow, amazing :)
100/100

Posted 8 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

8 Years Ago

Thank you! ^-^
Wish does words could be sad unto me,i love it

Posted 8 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

8 Years Ago

^^
What is my review? Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery, so here is my PERSONAL response to you, Amanda...
My love for you
Will always be.
Maybe hidden
Sometimes
But always there.

I'll compare my love for you
With the sun at day
And with the moon at night.

No matter where you'll be
You will always be able to spot it.
Clouds can maybe cover it up
But it'll always be there
Right behind those clouds
No matter how wide they might be.

My love for you will be as eternal
As thoughts
As ideas
And will always be right there
But maybe concealed...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

8 Years Ago

Hm... I don't get it? :-D
If this is dedicated to somebody then you just made that person feel special ;D


Posted 8 Years Ago


Yessssssss !!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Pretty

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love it. Who is it about? PM me that if u don't mind

Posted 8 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

8 Years Ago

It's not about anyone, yet :-)
Steven Cash

8 Years Ago

Ah ok gotcha. I thought you found someone and was afraid to say
I hope you find him soon
Amanda J. S.

8 Years Ago

Yeah... :-)

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Amanda J. S.
Amanda J. S.

Writersville, Denmark



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