In the Light of Darkness...

In the Light of Darkness...

A Poem by Amanda J. S.
"

A poem about my perspective on darkness... ^^

"
In The Light Of Darkness...
⟝⨳⟞

image

⟝⨳⟞

When the sun goes down,

Making way for the lonely moon,

I smile.

I smile because of the way the moon

Casts light over the otherwise inky night.

I love the symbolism of the moon

And how it stands out in the darkness.

But I also love the it,

The darkness,

Though some connect it with terror and horror movies.

I think it is misunderstood by many,

But I know

That without the darkness,

I for one,

Wouldn’t be the person I am today.

And that,

I think,

Would be such a shame.

I am not trying to sound vain,

Someone’s God, no

I know that little

Would think of me as adjacent to perfection,

But I am proud of the person I am today,

Even if just for a fleeting moment.

And maybe,

Maybe the darkness will come my way,

Yet again,

And teach me another lesson of life.

I,

For one,

Can’t wait to feel the darkness consume me,

And,

In the end,

Spot the moon.

© 2012 Amanda J. S.


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Yes .. your right even absolutely right that Darkness's important in our life cos after a darkness we reach the sky where light of blue sky welcome us. Moon's light's white and sun's is yellowish, day's bright but night's darkishhh... so, we always live in the bright white light of the day light and make mistakes and fall down on the ground where dark lights cover us gradually and hide us into a darkness of dark light ... as a day comes only after an end of the day or a dark light as same a new white light always comes from behind to grab our hand to pull us up so that we could stand up once again and never fall down again... life always teaches us lesson everyday ... in our life. It falls is down but it does pull us back to stand up on the same ground. It tells us making mistakes and we do... but it's teach us to not to do again what we do. That's all i just got from here. What a beautiful an inspirational piece dear you made. In short, after a dark nights, white lights always come in everyone's life to make the life beautiful living. I loved this and right now am gonna save it in my folder and gonna fav. it plus keep it in my Library ;) Brilliant job once again.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

6 Years Ago

Thank you ^^
Horizons

6 Years Ago

It's my pleasure reading your nice poems as always dear ;)
A very nice poem. The moon is a symbol for many things. Give us energy and hope. I enjoyed the description and story in your poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is such a creative and thought-provoking take on darkness. I really enjoyed reading it. Great job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

7 Years Ago

Thank you! ^^
I like it.
The ebb and flow of emotion and thoughtfullness.
Pacing and layout are interesting, in a good way.
:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

7 Years Ago

Thank you ^^
Love it! It is an amazing poem!
Love the picture too :3 (My background pic on tumblr xD)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ella

7 Years Ago

Lol, I don't care if you start an argument xD I don't understand it, that's all.
Amanda J. S.

7 Years Ago

Okay ^^
Ella

7 Years Ago

Ya, lol
Amazing. absolutely amazing. I love the moon as well :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

7 Years Ago

Thank you! ^^
I really love it. Cant really put it into words why or how, but it makes me feel something, and i think that's what makes good poetry!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

7 Years Ago

Thank you! That really means a lot! ^^
Sukylola

7 Years Ago

ur welcome.I've favourited it because i think i want to reread this alot more!!
Amanda J. S.

7 Years Ago

Oh, I'm honored! ^^
hhmm,never looked at darkness this way. Thank you for this read rquest. Well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

7 Years Ago

Thanks :o)
The moon and the darkness are VERY misunderstood.
Thank you for showing the people a new perspective about them both.
Bravo !

Posted 7 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

7 Years Ago

Heh, thank you :o)

First Page first
Previous Page prev
1
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

2346 Views
20 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 2 Libraries
Added on September 29, 2012
Last Updated on September 29, 2012

Author

Amanda J. S.
Amanda J. S.

Writersville, Denmark



About
Hello, lovely people of Wristerscafe.org! I am a sixteen-year-old girl from Denmark, and my name is Amanda :-) I began writing about one and a half year ago, and a day hasn't gone by without me .. more..

Writing
untitled. untitled.

A Story by Amanda J. S.



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Alone Alone

A Poem by Seashell