Loving is No Dance on Roses.

Loving is No Dance on Roses.

A Poem by Amanda J. S.

The story of my only breakup... A bit sad... Bur that's how life is sometimes is...

Loving is No Dance on Roses.



Letting go of your love…

I remember how hard it was.

Seeing your face in every cloud,

Every handsome male’s face.

Loving you

Was like a fairytale,

Just with a gloomy ending

Instead of a happy one…

I remember how petty I was.

Everyone took pity on me,

“Oh, poor Amanda, so sweet and yet so naive.”

And all the sweet words,

“He doesn’t deserve you;

He’s just a fool.”



I didn’t get those words,

Not from my dear friends,

But from my beloved family members.


My friends

Met up with him,

Hang out with him,

Made friends with him.

They didn’t even know him.

Had just met over the internet.


You know what?

All though I was a bit…

Bitter in the past,

I have forgiven them.

All of them.

For all their…


Even their sudden departure.

I love the good memories we’ve had together,

And those will always remain.

But sometimes,


The dark ones 

Overshadow these,


© 2012 Amanda J. S.

Author's Note

Amanda J. S.
Have you ever experienced something alike?

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I haven'tbut you made me feel the emotion so much it's like i had. Really good!!

Posted 9 Years Ago

Wow, This has an Exquisite Taste and Texture, and i believe it is safe to say Everyone has felt the Shadow of loves burdens. Wonderful write!

Posted 9 Years Ago

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sadly yes, but he moved on much quicker than i did, to a girl who only went out with him because she knew i still liked him :(

Posted 9 Years Ago

The dark ones
overshadow these.
Nice write.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Amanda J. S.

9 Years Ago

Thank you! :-)
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Amanda J. S.

9 Years Ago

Wow! Yes i have experiances this and it sucks! Good poem do i did enjoy it and made me remember somehtings that happened. Good job!


Posted 9 Years Ago

Very relatable... Great poem :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

Solid could feel the whole thing… who hasn’t experienced something like that keep it up I want more real s**t like this best yet bravo

Posted 9 Years Ago

Amanda J. S.

9 Years Ago

thank you! ^^
A real write.. we all have these phonies in disguise of friends... the sooner you get rid the better... but yes, sometimes it still hurts to think how stupid we had been... You have done a god job with this one.. straight and direct.. no mincing words.. Loved this

Posted 9 Years Ago

Amanda J. S.

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much :o)
Very relatable. Such honesty and emotion. Good job

Posted 9 Years Ago

Amanda J. S.

9 Years Ago

Thank you ^^

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Added on October 9, 2012
Last Updated on October 9, 2012
Tags: Love, friends, poem, gloomy, dark


Amanda J. S.
Amanda J. S.

Writersville, Denmark

Hello, lovely people of Wristerscafe.org! I am a sixteen-year-old girl from Denmark, and my name is Amanda :-) I began writing about one and a half year ago, and a day hasn't gone by without me .. more..

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