Broken To Pieces

Broken To Pieces

A Poem by Amanda Moubarak
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we brake things on the outside, a mirror, a bottle, a relationship... because we're trying to escape what's broken inside of us. In order to fix things, we have to start within ourselves.

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i pick up the pieces of the broken mirror
maybe i'll see myself clearer
but i won't, no
cause what's broken is not on the exterior
but deep inside of my soul
and just like the bottles on the floor
i'm empty inside
and all of the liquor
can't make me whole

© 2018 Amanda Moubarak


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Your poem is heart-wrenching. The reader is able to see the images of bottles on the floor and the pieces of the broken mirror and relate them to your mental pain. We are able to feel your state of depression. Nicely written.

Thanks for sharing. :)



Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amanda Moubarak

1 Year Ago

thank you so much for reading and for your lovely comment. it means a lot that you can relate to my .. read more
Tamara Beryl Latham

1 Year Ago

No problem. Just keep up with your writing. :)



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I've decided mirrors are bloody dangerous things.
Though I suppose we really have to look deeply into them to fix ourselves.
What's that great saying. You need to love yourself before you can love the world.
Wonder if there's anyone who's not broken in some way.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Amanda Moubarak

1 Year Ago

haha yes, we underestimated mirrors. lol. i agree with what you said 100%. i believe we are all brok.. read more
This is so wise and insightful....A superb write

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amanda Moubarak

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much! it means a lot
Honest and true words Amanda.
"cause what's broken is not on the exterior
but deep inside of my soul "
Rarely we see real face. People afraid to show real face or emotions. A powerful and worthwhile poem shared.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amanda Moubarak

1 Year Ago

yes true. thank you so much!
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome Amanda.
Your poem is heart-wrenching. The reader is able to see the images of bottles on the floor and the pieces of the broken mirror and relate them to your mental pain. We are able to feel your state of depression. Nicely written.

Thanks for sharing. :)



Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amanda Moubarak

1 Year Ago

thank you so much for reading and for your lovely comment. it means a lot that you can relate to my .. read more
Tamara Beryl Latham

1 Year Ago

No problem. Just keep up with your writing. :)

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Added on October 20, 2018
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Tags: #poetry, #poems, #poem, #poet, #broken, #pieces, #soul, #brokensoul, #empty, #emptybottles, #liquor, #emptyinside

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Amanda Moubarak
Amanda Moubarak

Bekaatet kenaan, Keserwen, Lebanon



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When I can't speak, I write :) I wrote an ebook (poems and writings) : Writings of a broken soul. I wrote rap songs alone and with a group (the mob production). Facebook Page : Writings and Poetry .. more..

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