A Wonderful Woman

What would you say to your reflection in the mirror? This is what I would say.

You are a strong, beautiful young woman

Who has been put through hell,

Who should not let her miserable past define who she is.

You are a strong, beautiful young woman

With both internal and external beauty,

Who is more than just a body or a face,

Who deserves much better,

And one day someone will see you for the woman you really are.

You are a strong, smart young woman

Who is growing through her writing,

Who will one day teach other young girls that they are worth more too.

You are a strong, smart young woman,

A woman with immense potential

Whose past has made her into the woman she is today.

You are a strong, powerful young woman

Whose voice can only get louder,

Whose words can only get more powerful.

You are a strong, powerful young woman

Who can create change if she is determined to use her voice,

Determined to put pen to paper.

You are a strong, talented young woman

Who must tell everyone her story

So that other teenagers can learn they are not alone

And parents can learn how to be there for their child in difficult times.

Reviews

[Mihika_d]

Amazing poesy full of positive thoughts and the spirit to rise up and roar, once again.

[fresnikson]

We need more of you in our lives, people who encourage us!
Good job on the poem!

[Chris Shaw]

I like very much the positives in this write. There are times when we are feeling down and vulnerable, that's when we should stand in front of that mirror and give ourselves a motivational speech. Nicely conveyed message.

Chris

[Melli]

Very inspiring message! I like the repetition of the first line with slight variations:)

[Amaya]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

[alpha_girl]

Love your poem. Its amazing girl. Keep it up.

[Amaya]

Thank you :)