Root of Heart

Root of Heart

A Poem by Amaya Sullivan
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A simple poem. Personally, it represents the beginning of love and the regret of not pursuing it. It may mean something different to you. Tell me what you think it means.

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It may be understandable to some,
It might be unfair to others,
I don't care.

The time when I was young,
A promise becomes undone.

Although I search with little clue,
I still don't know what to do.
Bury it deep within I thought,
But I still haven't forgot.

A root lies within my heart.

© 2014 Amaya Sullivan


Author's Note

Amaya Sullivan
It may be written completely wrong, but it's my thoughts. I'm not looking for critiques or anything or grammar problems. I just wanted to share my attempt of producing a poem.

Image is from: http://flowersplanets.blogspot.com/2011/10/ambrosia-flower.html

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I agree with what you stated in the second stanza. Youth is the phase of making promises, keeping them, and breaking them later... I am guilty of that. I am often indecisive and somewhat impulsive when it comes to 'promising' something. It's like having firm resolutions at night and watching them melt in the morning. Happens a lot.

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I agree with what you stated in the second stanza. Youth is the phase of making promises, keeping them, and breaking them later... I am guilty of that. I am often indecisive and somewhat impulsive when it comes to 'promising' something. It's like having firm resolutions at night and watching them melt in the morning. Happens a lot.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tags: heart, root, promise, love, regret

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Amaya Sullivan
Amaya Sullivan

Hot and Humid, FL



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