Fire Senryu

Fire Senryu

A Poem by Ambereen
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The element of nature fire symbolizes ironical feeling warmth or fury .

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Element of Life
Everlasting Affection
Agonizing burns

© 2013 Ambereen


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the irony of fire holds me astonished and so do your three lines:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


The two facets of fire...


Posted 11 Years Ago


Ambereen

11 Years Ago

Indeed "warmth and burns "
DIVYA

11 Years Ago

yes :)
I like this. Getting burnt is essential to life.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Good description of fire in seven words. You did a amazing job. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


With so little words come with mystifying meaning.

re: author's note- except for sonnet, i myself would not know the different forms of poetry. nicely penned.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ambereen

11 Years Ago

Thanks you
I'm not quite sure what a senryru is, but I did like this piece :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ambereen

11 Years Ago

thank u
Ambereen

11 Years Ago

It's a Japanese form of writing, It has to be
5-7-5 syllables.
A thousand definitions in 3 lines. Wonderfully done my friend

Posted 11 Years Ago


You've said so much with so little here...well done^^

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ambereen

11 Years Ago

thanks
Yes, it fits nicely, but even nicer than that fact, is this piece, how concise and truly meaningful!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ambereen

11 Years Ago

wow... My first one ...and must I say ur the Inspiration? Many thnx
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Wow, how sweet, I only starting writing them since I've been on WC about two months, I find them cha.. read more

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Added on January 27, 2013
Last Updated on January 28, 2013
Tags: fire, warmth, burns, fury

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Ambereen
Ambereen

India



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