A Senryu on Senyru

A Senryu on Senyru

A Poem by Ambereen
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Syllables and thoughts
On paper I  Do Engrave
 I  get SENRYU 

© 2013 Ambereen


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TRUE:) what else have i to say?:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is amazing! I can't say much since everybody said it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Great portrayal of a senryu!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lucky lass!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Perfection!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ambereen

11 Years Ago

:)
If your taking lessons from frieda tell her to sign me up!! Great job

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ambereen

11 Years Ago

hehe .... She managed to point of an error which made this piece a senyru hence the credit ...
C.C. Marx

11 Years Ago

Give credit where credit is due but make sure u take 95% of the glory, and all pride money ;)
Ambereen

11 Years Ago

these golden words I hv etched in my mind :)
That's it, a good explanation,

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great poem 100/100


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ambereen

11 Years Ago

Thank u
interesting I like it

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ambereen

11 Years Ago

thnx

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Added on January 30, 2013
Last Updated on January 31, 2013
Tags: senryu, syllables, thoughts

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Ambereen
Ambereen

India



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