Any body there ?

Any body there ?

A Story by Ambereen
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A short story I entered for a contest .

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I had just entered my first apartment. The perfect one for me sea facing ,cozy Just right I should say.

I began settling things in the bedroom first. When I realized there was an unfurnished portion of the wall. Never noticed it before. The unpainted corner had something eerie about it. An instinct told me to place my ears on the wall. What I heard made me skip a heartbeat.” Tick Tock tick Tock “I could hear the watch right behind it. Was there somebody there?  A cadaver ! Oh NO!!

© 2013 Ambereen


Author's Note

Ambereen
Entered this for a contest . Tell me how it is ? will write a continuation later .

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It is good in concept but bare in credibility as it jumps from the unknown to relaisation it was a watch ticking too quickly.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Maybe it's me, I'm not following, how did you get from 'tick, tock' a watch to a cadaver...maybe in the continuance it'll pull it all together.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Frieda P

11 Years Ago

This is when I do most of my writing.
Ambereen

11 Years Ago

:)
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Oh goodness, a cadaver, perish the thought! A lively, mysterious piece of writing. Well done! Thank you for submitting this to my contest! ~ Helena

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ambereen

11 Years Ago

I am glad you liked it ... will write further in another version !
Helena

11 Years Ago

I look forward to that!!

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Added on February 1, 2013
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Tags: Suspense, dead body, apartment, crime

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Ambereen
Ambereen

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