Break Free

Break Free

A Poem by Ambereen




Shouting out aloud

In my mind

Daring me to break free

From the make believe world

To live a life I want 

A choice I must make

But the fear of failure grips

Lest people get another chance to ridicule

I never wanted to be what I am

I never wanted to do what I am 

I want something different

Do not know what 

But certainly not this 

I feel suffocated

I do not look forward to a new day

Instead I love when it ends

I do not knowwhere to look for an answer

I need courage to take a decision 

A right one I hope

© 2013 Ambereen

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"I never wanted to do what I am" i guess it should be i never wanted to do what i DO? and "I do not knowwhere to look for an answer" it sould be KNOW WHERE"...the best picks of this piece are "I do not look forward to a new day;
Instead I love when it ends
good write:)

Posted 8 Years Ago

There is a heartache inside anyone who does not at least try to chase their dreams, sometimes the choice is the biggest obstacle to overcome. I like this very much, I think many people will understand exactly where you are coming from.

Posted 8 Years Ago


8 Years Ago

Thanks I am glad you Understand...

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2 Reviews
Added on February 5, 2013
Last Updated on February 5, 2013
Tags: undecided, courage, break free, failure, me, thoughts




A Novice to poetry and a Chartered Accountant by profession . Recently i Stumbled on the fact that i could write a few lines with ease . So here i am, i would love all suggestions and reviews from .. more..

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