Autumn Doubts

Autumn Doubts

A Poem by amdc101
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Written in Round Robin Writers group

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First Round Robin

By amdc101, S Sanders, and Sudhanshu

 

Autumn Doubts

 

The colors of the crunchy leaves beneath my feet add warmth to the cool air biting my

 

nose and cheeks

 

Autumn leaves sashay to the ground.  I take them in, enjoy the sound of children playing

 

in piles of yellow and gold.

 

The dripping of the morning dew as they fall upon the swirling leaves;

 

Like a tear-drop from your eyes, they touch my soul in unsaid ways;

 

and only you know the reason why.

 

Your eyes are as clear as the blue sky; no clouds there

 

Yet I see those lingering doubts in your misty eyes appear. Why are they no longer

 

sunshine clear?

© 2011 amdc101


Author's Note

amdc101
The three of us wrote this together in the Round Robin group, taking turns writing lines. Come check out the group!

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Brilliant! I once wrote a poem in this way. It was called the Battle of Poetry!

Lovable work! I loved the lines...

"Autumn leaves sashay to the ground.
I take them in, enjoy the sound of children playing
in piles of yellow and gold."

Posted 7 Years Ago



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