nothing without you

this is a bone I would really like to pick - CLEAN

There is nothing great
About your love admission
Nothing without me.

Reviews

[Eric Pudalov]

Ouch, KL!!! This is awesome - and quite bitter, if I do say so myself. Which is why I like it. I love senryu, don't you? You're a strong contender in the contest!! (Which reminds me, I'd better keep up on reading the rest of them.) ;-)

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much. I love senryu.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Nothing becomes that with which we play the game, well done, good read.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you. I don't know why this particular thing grates on me so badly. There is a new song that keeps playing on my radio "Nothing without you" I want to scream at the radio - why would I want you if you are nothing without me! Anyway, enough rant.:)

[Frieda P]

How true, we all fall into this trap sometimes, then we learn our own value and we make a better mate, nicely pen'd...short and to the point!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Clear, concise and to the bone!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

relationships work when they are out of want...not need.

two who can stand alone, stand better together.

[Dispersus]

this portrays the sense of weakness and frailty so many subject themselves to as we hunger for the warmth, the need, the madness of Love

funny, it is usually said in a moment of adoration...yet the weakness is clear....sparse and effectual

Peace

[Lyn Anderson]

It is usually said, and sung, in that way. And it is a niggling pet peeve of mine. If a person is nothing without you they cannot stand on their own and in fact are an ineffectual partner.:)

[Dispersus]

"if I need you to make me, I do not need you"