dig

sometimes you just gotta dig

Dig
at
the
bottom
scratch
claw
pull
drag
it
back
to
the
surface
help
it
breathe
don't
bury
it
         again.

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well alright then.You can borrow my shovel anytime KL .Interesting poem :)

[Neville]

This sounds both physically and emotionally very painful... I could of course be miles off centre, in which case I may just have 'gotta dig some more' ... N

[Pryde Foltz]

Yes … the heart needs air even if it's choking sometimes.

[Lyn Anderson]

bravo and clever girl.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

My dear KLG you need an excavator, lol! Interesting thoughts.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

like Chris said..this is so nicely open ended...nice allegory used here.

[Chris]

this can be anything negative or positive emotionally or mentally... and the effort expended to change.

[Sami Khalil]

I dig not this poem and its meaning but I like it alive like it is...Bravo............