asocial wolves

asocial wolves

A Chapter by Lyn Anderson
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a howling senryu

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raised asocial wolves
forgot pack's proper order
howling all alone



© 2016 Lyn Anderson


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Wow, KL!! This is a great senryu! (And bitingly sarcastic, if I'm not mistaken.) I initially took it to be nature-related, but obviously it has deep symbolism (and if you read the tags, that seems true).

And thank you for entering this in the contest; I'm in the process of deciding the winners right now. That'll be a tough one, because there are so many great entries.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

I like to make my senryu's a pseudo haiku, if you know what I mean ...:)
Eric Pudalov

9 Years Ago

Yes, I definitely know what you mean! I hope you're OK, KL - you've had such dark poetry lately.
Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Really? Dark? I think you need to read the last few. Nk
I loved this senryu, one of the best I've read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

thank you so much.
good senryu.........................

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

Thanks muchly
Howling good, did you know that cannibalism is common amongst wolves, and I think they eat puddy tats too, just saying...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much. I have a lot of RRs to catch up on.
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

I guess your night was a success then. ;-)
A lone wolf is truly alone always looking for her lost pack. We, like wolves, are not hard wired to be alone. I hope the howl brings a reply.

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Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much, I was feeling packless.
Are we raised or do we find what we need to raise ourselves in our environments? I wonder. In any case, good senyru. I liked it. lydi**

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Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much
Ha very nice cat.Got a smile out of me but I think you have found yourself a pack in WC so deal with it :)

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Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

Ha. A pack of crazy wolves anyway.
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Well be that as it may Kit Kat you are loved :)
clever use of the senryu...

sometimes we just raise ourselves...and usually that does make us more or less anti-social.

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Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

I suppose so. Thanks for your review.

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Added on March 29, 2014
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Lyn Anderson

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