sometimes it hurts

the future ahead, the past still aches some.

when wishes were wonders
and hopes were  new--
turn back to forever
when I thought you
were true.

Reviews

[Ted Kniffen]

A beautiful piece of writing. A few simple words that convey true emotion. The story behind the words is there. We don't need a hundred stanzas to see its in all of us. A good write.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you very much. Sometimes brevity is best. :)

[Alfred Kukitz]

The damn lie is pervasive in men, in culture.

Hey Baby you will pull through because your secret lover is poetry.

Regards,
Al

[Lyn Anderson]

Ah, most definitely. This is one of my many historical pieces that I am now organising into books. It is a ridiculous project, but I am now over half way through.:)

[Alfred Kukitz]

Best wishes KL!

[Ana Papaya]

This hits the mark, wow.
Nice one.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you, I appreciate it.

[Ruth]

Painful when such innocence and new promises become stained...I felt this hon x

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks a lot. I relate a lot to yours too.:)

[Brittany Zedalis]

If only we could have known in the past what we know now. Wonderful work with this.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much. You are such a sweetheart.:)

[Caradoc]

I feel like I could have written this one. Very well done, KL. I love the way you've done this one. Less than twenty words too.

Sometimes it hurts indeed.

Well written.

-Cara

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks for stopping by old soul:)

[Caradoc]

It's always a pleasure. :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You never know how things will end up.The only certainty is it is never the way you planned.

[Lyn Anderson]

This is so true.:) thanks as always for your words.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Madalyn Beck]

The past can feel like an open wound at times where the future holds so much promise. I love the way you write, KL. xo (:

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much. I appreciate your continued readership.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

an ache in this one for sure.
thinking back to when we thought someone was true...but unfortunately we can't turn back to forever...once we are disillusioned, those hopes are shattered.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much. I appreciate it.

[A. Amos]

Loved the magic in your write...epic!

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much for stopping by.

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome