A handme down gift

A handme down gift

A Chapter by Lyn Anderson
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inspired by my blanket girl

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Life is a handme down gift
she said to me --
treasure the moments
of life
we all share
sitting beside
the fire
tonight
in our handme down life.



© 2016 Lyn Anderson


Author's Note

Lyn Anderson
My 7 year old daughter dictated this poem to me. I thought it was pretty good. She picked the image from stock fire images too.

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interesting, nice write.................

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Thanks as always
This poem was great. Your daughter is very talented at such a young age. It was very deep thinking. I enjoyed this so much today.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Thanks. She is enjoying the reviews. I am going to make my kids their own page.
Awww...this is so sweet. She's wise beyond her young years! You're grooming another poetess! I love that! I'm going to start calling you poet mama pretty soon!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot. She came up with it, I was actually really impressed.
Bright Ocean Star

9 Years Ago

Absolutely. She takes after her mama!
So much wisdom for 7 years old! This is wonderful!

:) Julie

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, I appreciate it.
So much wisdom for 7 years old! This is wonderful!

:) Julie

Posted 9 Years Ago


Smart like her mama I see .Wonderful poem by your little lady :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Aww, I think so, but I am a mom ...
Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Lol.....everyone thinks so :)
a fine write from a young talent

Posted 9 Years Ago


a fine write from a young talent

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much. Her and my other daughter are going to have their own page.
I'm impressed big-time...I was certainly not this profound at that age...we're all living hand-me-down lives essentially...great work :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot. I was actually a little blown away by her thoughts.
So beautiful!
You must be so proud.
I have a daughter same age, turning seven this year. :)
Bundles of fun.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Yeah I am. Thanks a lot. It is a fun age.

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Lyn Anderson
Lyn Anderson

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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