sun drop
A Chapter by
Lyn Anderson
an inspiration on a rainy day turned sun
Once I held a Sun drop that was you (it) Split the atom that was my heart in two.
© 2016 Lyn Anderson
Author's Note
I changed the format on this thought, while keeping the metaphor the same.
Reviews
I read this two years ago. wow.
My comment stills stands. I like it. :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thank you kindly my lady.
7 Years Ago
My pleasure. :)
Succinct and very potent... intense little heart-stopper.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Succinct and very potent... intense little heart-stopper.
9 Years Ago
Thank you for dropping in
Nicely done. : )
Love the subtle revision.
on the bright side babe...
Now you can share your heart with TWO men.
You've got such a big heart that there's enough for more than one right?
Posted 9 Years Ago
Nicely done. : )
Love the subtle revision.
on the bright side babe...
Now you can share your heart with TWO men.
You've got such a big heart that there's enough for more than one right?
9 Years Ago
ha ha, now the secret's out, I am just waiting for the right opportunity ...
9 Years Ago
This just keeps getting better. :)
Metaphorically this is mind blowing, flow wise, just steals the breath, gorgeous x
Posted 9 Years Ago
Metaphorically this is mind blowing, flow wise, just steals the breath, gorgeous x
9 Years Ago
Thanks, I appreciate that, especially from one who is so adept at metaphors, in my opinion.
9 Years Ago
I appreciate your words too hon, thank you so much x
9 Years Ago
Always my pleasure sweets. xo
Ah what a nice little inspiration… a wonderful metaphoric analogy.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Ah what a nice little inspiration… a wonderful metaphoric analogy.
9 Years Ago
Thanks so much, I still am playing catch up and will spruce it up in a bit ...
Nice image- thought. That atomic heart. I have heard what happens when you split an atom, and I have heard what happens when a heart is broken into two. Pity the poor scarecrow. Pity more the poor heartless tin man, who has a brain that can ponder his loss.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Nice image- thought. That atomic heart. I have heard what happens when you split an atom, and I have heard what happens when a heart is broken into two. Pity the poor scarecrow. Pity more the poor heartless tin man, who has a brain that can ponder his loss.
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9 Years Ago
You are brilliant, and I appreciate your stopping in, always.
Ooo nice one KL :).......
Posted 9 Years Ago
Ooo nice one KL :).......
9 Years Ago
Thanks for noticing by little sun drop.
9 Years Ago
You are most welcome KL :)
Very good for a minute one
Posted 9 Years Ago
Very good for a minute one
9 Years Ago
Thanks so much, sometimes a little says a lot.
Love the thought.
Super charged...
RR me if you make changes.
It stands up though.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Love the thought.
Super charged...
RR me if you make changes.
It stands up though.
9 Years Ago
Yes it will be tweaked later hard to post from phone
9 Years Ago
Don't text and drive on your way to church... :)
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Lyn Anderson Toronto, Ontario, Canada
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