clever boy

clever boy

A Chapter by Lyn Anderson
"

figured out something no one else did

"
Clever boy,
you figured out
you could do more
than melt ice cubes
by strategic placement
even hearts will defrost
with the right setting,
and the correct operator.




© 2016 Lyn Anderson


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A very heart warming poem K. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

7 Years Ago

Thanks. I needed quite the defrosting after all those years.
Papaya

7 Years Ago

And look at you now... :)
Lyn Anderson

7 Years Ago

Just a puddle.:)
What a clear and concise picture your draw here. Your words, though few, convey a mountain of images in the mind.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the very thorough review.
Spicy little bit of poetry you have here, but not obscene, nice and tasteful and the perfect amount of innuendo. Very lovely work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much, I appreciate that.
Did we have a good night? ;)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Melted a few ice cubes, slept like a baby:)
Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Just keep rubbing it in, you ARE relentless woman. ;) MWAH!
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ron
Cute poem KL. That can happen sometimes.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Thanks, Ron, I appreciate the review.
ron

9 Years Ago

Your most welcome KL.
Ok so he put them in your gin and tonic!?

Lovely little ditty!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Yes, sure, although I am a Rum and Coke girl -- I am sure you will have something to say about that.
Reminds me of that song: smooth operator by M. J.

dont think this needs a mature banner though.
Pretty mild images as to melting ones heart.

Enjoyed.Trace

Posted 9 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

9 Years Ago

Prefer Sade's rendition of 'Smooth Operator'.
Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Me too. LOL
Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Wasn't sure about the mature banner. I guess it passes.
I love this metaphor...your wit borders on morose sometimes, which is my favourite kind of wit.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Mine too. Must be a Canadian thing.:)
kublakhan27

9 Years Ago

Haha Yeah everyone who thinks we're so polite needs to read more of our poetry :P
The key to a woman's heart is showing you that you love her, not just telling her.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much, I appreciate it.
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

9 Years Ago

Twas my pleasure :)))

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Added on August 3, 2014
Last Updated on September 22, 2016
Tags: love, romance, sex, love is blind, unexpected, life, new beginnings


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Lyn Anderson
Lyn Anderson

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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