I sigh into you

In the night
I hear you breathing --
I move over,
and sigh into you
stirring softly,
gentle --
you wake.

how I long to
take away
the ache
that furrows
your brow
and dishevels
your smile.

you've been
waiting for her.
here she is,
beside you,
all the while.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Madalyn Beck]

Awe! This is definitely "sigh" worthy! Beautiful pen, KL! :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much. I really like this one too. I am happy the way it came out.

[Anne Timmins]

Awwww So lovely and gentle. I read this piece a few times. A very nice write.

[Lyn Anderson]

Very nice of you to say, thank you.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Well I will have to sigh myself cause this is romantic in the highest form.

[Lyn Anderson]

Well, thank you, kind sir.

[Neville]

Another good un if you want my opinion......N

[Lyn Anderson]

Your opinion is always appreciated, even when you don't like my rap -- yep, I remember everything, and I still love ya!

[Neville]

Thank Goode for that

[Frieda P]

Sigh....big SIGH, love it, so few words that hit that note, and have always loved this song.

[Lyn Anderson]

Yes, I know, you used it before, but I thought it fit here. So few words, yes. This is my idea of sap. I don't know greeting card Hallmark kind of goo, it just isn't in me (nor in you, for that matter) ...:)

[Frieda P]

It's mostly teenage sap, but you know how that goes when you're 17 or whatever...I kind of miss those days when we weren't so aware. Reality bites. ;)

[Lyn Anderson]

Yes, and I liked that movie too -- summed it up nicely. Reality does bite.

[Matching Socks]

So beautiful and moving.
That loving sigh is so special...
I do wonder about the line waiting for her...
I hope for his same he realizes the 'her' is the woman next to him.

[Lyn Anderson]

Yes, one would hope.:)

[Matching Socks]

Ugh, that should say his sake... :)
But I know you understand me.

[Lyn Anderson]

yes, I did. Sometimes the keyboard is quicker than the mind.

[Matching Socks]

And we all know how quick and sharp my mind is right?
So it's no wonder. ;)
Wait, did I just insult myself? See what I mean, sheesh...

[Sami Khalil]

Very romantic and beautiful. You do awake the gentle giant in beasts. Bravo.

[Lyn Anderson]

Aww, thanks so much. I think I have been showing my softer side a bit more as of late.

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome.