Random babblescapes.

urgent mind letters

Babbling insistence
the urgency
burbles inside my mind
travelling unravelling
portents of persistent
past tense pain
painting liquid landscapes
languishing treachery
tersely taunting the wet
and weary remains
reminiscing
underlying
false perceptions
of love.

Author's Note

okay this is a bit of a ramble. A pattern, using alliteration, and certain letters.
Don't know if it works or not.

Reviews

[willweb]

This was like I climbed down the ladder to find the sense at the bottom, if if it was false perceptions, it was there and waiting. Nice one KLGoode.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you for once again taking the time.

[willweb]

Hey, I always have time for you and your wonderful poetry my friend. :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you very much.

[MomzillaNC]

It's terrible the lies we tell each other… the lies we tell ourselves. Truth may be subjective, but we're all too ready to paint lies as Truth. In the end, all the false truths lead only to tears.

But, with the tears fall away the falsehoods. The tears wash away the blinders that kept us from seeing the the truth. Hopefully, we will heal and move on… know real Truth and find True Love. That's my hope for you and for your kids.

[Lyn Anderson]

Serenity. Peace. Whatever else. Thank you

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome. Keeping looking up and out…

[therisa]

Right now, my mind would be, the perfect model, for your poem, KL. With thoughts going, in a thousand and one different directions, none making any sense to me. Can feel, a huge sigh coming on, as I write this. Thank you, KL, for sharing.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you as always

[therisa]

Your welcome, KL.

[Delmar Cooper]

Here lies the poet: For the craft, drawn, quartered and alliterated. Requiescat In Pace

[Lyn Anderson]

I love that, thank you. Probably will be expanded upon.

[icelandicblue]

We swirl around in our thoughts caught in the vortex of it all. I really enjoyed the alliteration and how you brought the reader from the babble to the point.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you. It was a bit of an experiment, my own thought pattern, glad it makes sense to someone.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You describe well the state of over thinking we get into when hurt in this one.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks, I really appreciate your extended visit. I was sitting in the doctor's office taking notes on my phone.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

great sarcasm eloquently presented with alliterative assonance and a cacophony of consonance.

[Lyn Anderson]

Okay, that's what I was going for. Not crazy about my song choice. But thankyou, at least I know I am on the right track.